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Word battle: Temple VS church
Maybe change it to "Worldwide Jedi Organization"? We would have to amend that once we start making alien friends, though.
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Church = being told what to think / duty / chore
Temple = place of learning
Another portion of respondents feel the exact opposite:
Church = place of learning
Temple = place of duty
Looking back over time, each has been used for both, amongst the various denominations and ancient religions. But yes, "church" is usually perceived as being Christian in nature.
As for removing the tagline, I believe John was saying in the other thread that it's there for search engine purposes to help people find TOTJO easier when they don't know what TOTJO is or that it even exists yet.
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Avalonslight wrote: As for removing the tagline, I believe John was saying in the other thread that it's there for search engine purposes to help people find TOTJO easier when they don't know what TOTJO is or that it even exists yet.
In what context? Simply google Jediism and our symbol is usually the first thing one sees, quickly followed by our site...
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We certainly don't need the word "church" in the tagline to explain what we're about, the title alone (not to mention the home page) should explain that rather easily I should think. The tagline is a tad bit overkill imo...
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The real power in some CMS sites is as a basis for customization rather then just running as is. But customization means every time there is a security or version update, the process needs to be managed to integrate the customization (most usually after the update is installed) - this can take awhile (days or months). Meaning the site looks different for awhile until it can be bought back. The site dev would know about all the little things, but each one needs to be done one at a time often, and the order things get done is up to the dev to decide what is more important.
I do not know how this one works, but often these things are built on the bones of older versions and inherit some of the old bits as software developers focus on things which don't work, rather then the stuff which does - so it wouldn't surprise me that tagline appeared because the site update reset the old templates. But it wouldn't surprise me if I was wrong either

What works best for search engines is broad yet accurate keywords, not a most accurate succinct sentence IMO.
If I was right, then the options could be;
1. to keep the 'site description' as a field to use the most useful wording to 'keep' us relevant to search engines, including things like church, but use some other text as a subheading at the site to better suit our identity.
2. to remove it entirely and save vertical space.
3. compromise and change the 'site description'' to better suit our identity at the risk of reducing our relevance to search engines.
4. other options always exist

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3. compromise and change the 'site description'' to better suit our identity at the risk of reducing our relevance to search engines.
I really don't think this is an issue, we get hundreds of people joining all the time. People find us perfectly ok without the tagline.
When a star wars film is released hundreds turns to thousands.
I think we're pretty safe on the 'finding members through search engines' front.
My vote would be to get rid of the tagline entirely.. our name explains what we are perfectly fine.
It won't let me have a blank signature ...
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Here we are almost a year ago to the day. https://web.archive.org/web/20160729195946/https://www.templeofthejediorder.org/
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