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10 years 2 months ago #133071 by Alexandre Orion
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Hamsters do it well ;
Not all can be ha-i-ku --
It has to have grace.

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Be a philosopher ; but, amidst all your philosophy, be still a man.
~ David Hume

Chaque homme a des devoirs envers l'homme en tant qu'homme.
~ Henri Bergson
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10 years 2 months ago - 10 years 2 months ago #133386 by
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Ice crawls over glass
Wind blowing into darkness
As the cars shiver
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10 years 2 months ago #133387 by
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Asgard's dark harbor.
God's peer repose sunlight's shore.
maiden where? Please here!

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10 years 2 months ago #133391 by
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Forgiving myself
Knowing I am capable
Learning to let go

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10 years 2 months ago #133435 by
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I shiver with glee
Strange feeling runs up my spine
Medichlorians

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10 years 2 months ago #133805 by
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Jedis are careful,
Deliberate and measured,
But not good at counting.

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10 years 2 months ago - 10 years 2 months ago #135252 by
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We tend to stick to a pretty general definition of haiku here, and I'm guilty of that as well here... you don't want to be the only guy writing 5-3-3 haiku for example :D but I thought this might be of interest to some of you. It gives you a more "contemporary" definition of haiku, including kigo, kireji etc.

I'm not posting this to say "You're all doing it wrong!" because there is no "wrong", I just thought it might be interesting :)


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10 years 1 month ago #135649 by
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Changes so quickly
Even I cannot keep up
All within myself

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10 years 1 month ago - 10 years 1 month ago #135650 by
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Did I do that right :P
There were so many new rules ;)
Something about fall :dry:
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10 years 1 month ago #135653 by steamboat28
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Reliah wrote: Did I do that right :P
There were so many new rules ;)
Something about fall :dry:



It doesn't matter;
"Learn the rules, and then forget,"
Those were Basho's words.
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