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25 Sep 2010 10:35 #33407 by RyuJin
jedi haiku was created by RyuJin
thought i'd try something out and open a spot for members to try thier hand at haiku(japanese style poetry). haiku follows a very simply pattern of 3 lines with a combined total of 17 syllables usually arranged with 5 syllables in the first line 7 in the second and 5 in the third. to get things started here goes:

at one with the force
a jedi uses wisdom
to do what is right

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27 Sep 2010 16:14 #33468 by RyuJin
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a clear mind sees all
the past,present,and future
the key, meditate

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27 Sep 2010 23:48 #33473 by RyuJin
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past,present,future
time is always in motion
forever changing

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10 Jul 2011 04:07 #40355 by RyuJin
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like the bird of flames
we are reborn with new life
after our trials

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11 Jul 2011 11:23 #40400 by
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I've always loved writing Haikus. The simplicity and beauty of them have always drawn me in.

Training my body,
Both mental and physical,
I am a Jedi.

Not nearly as good as yours, but I thought I would give it a shot. :)

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12 Jul 2011 08:11 #40414 by RyuJin
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believe it or not i wasn't always good at haiku myself...always liked them but had no talent for it...it was only in the last few years that i developed a knack for it...

it's pleasant expressing one's self artisticly isn't it though...

in the old times one would call someone like me a rennaisance man...i dabble in martial arts, music, painting/drawing, writing, building/designing....basically a little of everything...much like a historical figure i admire, leonardo di vinci, among others...

artistic expression...that's what this thread is for ;)

feel free to submit more

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30 Aug 2011 03:47 #41803 by RyuJin
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to master the force
one must take the path that ends
with self mastery

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30 Aug 2011 05:53 #41807 by
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from the void we are born
into wave and particle
we are the force

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30 Aug 2011 10:20 #41821 by
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I must control Rage,
For I follow Jediism;
Not the Dark Side's path.

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30 Aug 2011 10:28 #41823 by
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Through meditation
I clear my mind of all things,
As peace flows through me.

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