jedi haiku

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30 Jan 2014 12:03 #135668 by
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Reliah writes well
So really, let's not worry
About stupid "rules" ;)

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Steamboat's was better
So I'm off to stick my head
Into the oven.

Wait... :huh:

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30 Jan 2014 12:16 - 30 Jan 2014 12:36 #135669 by
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On the subject of change (v Jedi) and I'm having "ev-ry-thing" as 3 syllables, I'm British ;) :

Change is everything
Leaves drift along the river
To meet with the falls

or maybe

Everything is change
Spring wind touches river ice
Unlocks autumn leaves
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30 Jan 2014 14:53 - 30 Jan 2014 14:54 #135689 by void
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tzb wrote: On the subject of change (v Jedi) and I'm having "ev-ry-thing" as 3 syllables, I'm British ;)


...ohlord. now I want to try a haiku in my native dialect...

"Ev-er-ee-thang stinks
Y'all talk all 'em fancy words
book-larnin' ain't me."
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31 Jan 2014 08:06 #135782 by
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Happy New Year All,
For those who celebrate the
Lunar calendar

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01 Feb 2014 20:09 #135981 by
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Wind lashes the trees
Trying to make sense as I
Yoyo up and down

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01 Apr 2014 12:34 #143172 by
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Half an hour's silence
Stillness descends, touching sleep
Blossoms in the pond

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01 Apr 2014 12:44 #143173 by Edan
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Grey worries of mine
Not food for my summer soul
Pass and disappear
"Evil is always possible. And goodness is eternally difficult."
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02 Apr 2014 07:04 #143313 by Reacher
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Awake In The Night
Aethereal Confluence
Sleep Flies Before It
Jedi Knight

The self-confidence of the warrior is not the self-confidence of the average man. The average man seeks certainty in the eyes of the onlooker and calls that self-confidence. The warrior seeks impeccability in his own eyes and calls that humbleness. The average man is hooked to his fellow men, while the warrior is hooked only to infinity.
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02 Apr 2014 23:19 #143386 by
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Moonlight, together
You reach inside and kindle
Our sudden sunrise

Dull sun descending
Floats across the Atlantic
Silently, the moon

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05 Apr 2014 23:09 #143617 by void
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Clacking down the tracks
Time gives rise to memory
Wishing you were here
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