Nimrod Socialism

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7 years 1 month ago - 7 years 1 week ago #277289 by
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7 years 1 month ago #277290 by Kit
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This is the second time you've posted this and I'm still not sure why I should read it. Especially when you didn't comment on it the last time :)
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7 years 1 month ago #277292 by Whyte Horse
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I would like to thank you for taking the time to write such a lengthy article. It looks like you've thought about this a great deal and you're very dedicated to it. You need to learn how to organize your thoughts in an essay. This pdf file is not organized and difficult to read. I really lost it after a few sentences. Try to take some more time to reflect on what you want to say and reorganize it to help your intended audience understand. The first paragraph should outline what the essay is about and present key ideas. The middle paragraphs should solidify the ideas with concrete evidence. The last paragraph should summarize the essay.

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.
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7 years 1 month ago #277325 by
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Kit wrote: This is the second time you've posted this and I'm still not sure why I should read it. Especially when you didn't comment on it the last time :)



After opening the article I don't think the poster is being completely forthright concerning his intentions here.

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7 years 1 month ago #277326 by
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Kyrin Wyldstar wrote:

Kit wrote: This is the second time you've posted this and I'm still not sure why I should read it. Especially when you didn't comment on it the last time :)



After opening the article I don't think the poster is being completely forthright concerning his intentions here.


My ears are open , what do you mean Kyrin?

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7 years 1 month ago #277330 by
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MartaLina wrote:

Kyrin Wyldstar wrote:

Kit wrote: This is the second time you've posted this and I'm still not sure why I should read it. Especially when you didn't comment on it the last time :)



After opening the article I don't think the poster is being completely forthright concerning his intentions here.


My ears are open , what do you mean Kyrin?


Well, The OP has been here 3 weeks and only posted twice. Both times just to link this article. Have you read the article? Its nonsense.

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7 years 1 month ago #277333 by
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I agree. It's like diarrhea of the mind; spewing whatever, wherever, with no solidity. If the writer was trying to get a point across, it was lost and the piece should be better constructed to lead the reader to whatever point they were trying to make. In other words, like Whyte Horse said, organize your thoughts and structure your piece so as to convey your point of view.

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7 years 1 month ago #277337 by rugadd
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With respect, this is a hot mess. Please consider Whyte Horse' advice and restructure the information in a more easily digestible fashion.

Here is a link that may help you.

http://www.fastweb.com/student-life/articles/essay-tips-7-tips-on-writing-an-effective-essay

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7 years 1 month ago - 7 years 1 month ago #277341 by OB1Shinobi
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the first time this was posted i saw a random stranger invoking the category of sith and asking me to click a hyperlink that said "nimrod"

and took it as the internet's version of "hey,hey, pull my finger"

Warning: Spoiler!


@Heavenly Warrior - im not that interested in Sith stuff but if i were, i would ask the people who have been posting here for years who i know have put a lot of time and energy into it

no offense but i dont know you, and every few weeks or sometimes months a new person comes through wanting to talk about Sith based on their own assumptions and expectations, and what they have to say is quite different from what actual practicing Sith have to say for themselves

its been done enough times that most of us arent really excited to jump into it again

People are complicated.
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7 years 1 month ago - 7 years 1 month ago #277360 by Edan
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When people sometimes mention 'printing the internet' this article is what I imagine it would look like.

It won't let me have a blank signature ...
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