Nimrod Socialism

Please read the attachment. Let me know if you have any questions.

This is the second time you've posted this and I'm still not sure why I should read it. Especially when you didn't comment on it the last time

I would like to thank you for taking the time to write such a lengthy article. It looks like you've thought about this a great deal and you're very dedicated to it. You need to learn how to organize your thoughts in an essay. This pdf file is not organized and difficult to read. I really lost it after a few sentences. Try to take some more time to reflect on what you want to say and reorganize it to help your intended audience understand. The first paragraph should outline what the essay is about and present key ideas. The middle paragraphs should solidify the ideas with concrete evidence. The last paragraph should summarize the essay.

Kit wrote: This is the second time you've posted this and I'm still not sure why I should read it. Especially when you didn't comment on it the last time

After opening the article I don't think the poster is being completely forthright concerning his intentions here.

MartaLina wrote:

Kyrin Wyldstar wrote:

Kit wrote: This is the second time you've posted this and I'm still not sure why I should read it. Especially when you didn't comment on it the last time

After opening the article I don't think the poster is being completely forthright concerning his intentions here.

My ears are open , what do you mean Kyrin?

Well, The OP has been here 3 weeks and only posted twice. Both times just to link this article. Have you read the article? Its nonsense.

I agree. It's like diarrhea of the mind; spewing whatever, wherever, with no solidity. If the writer was trying to get a point across, it was lost and the piece should be better constructed to lead the reader to whatever point they were trying to make. In other words, like Whyte Horse said, organize your thoughts and structure your piece so as to convey your point of view.

With respect, this is a hot mess. Please consider Whyte Horse' advice and restructure the information in a more easily digestible fashion.

Here is a link that may help you.

www.fastweb.com/student-life/articles/es...g-an-effective-essay

the first time this was posted i saw a random stranger invoking the category of sith and asking me to click a hyperlink that said "nimrod"

and took it as the internet's version of "hey,hey, pull my finger"



@Heavenly Warrior - im not that interested in Sith stuff but if i were, i would ask the people who have been posting here for years who i know have put a lot of time and energy into it

no offense but i dont know you, and every few weeks or sometimes months a new person comes through wanting to talk about Sith based on their own assumptions and expectations, and what they have to say is quite different from what actual practicing Sith have to say for themselves

its been done enough times that most of us arent really excited to jump into it again

When people sometimes mention 'printing the internet' this article is what I imagine it would look like.