I'm trying to scot for business, opinions for this

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19 Mar 2012 13:08 #53832 by
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Calling All Prom Princesses
And Teen Idols
Want a little pampering for your prom then look no farther:
Operation Prom
Has arrived at The Hide-Away
North Cotes
Prom Preparation Package includes
Manicure
Pedicure
Facial or Back massage
Spray Tan
All for just £35

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19 Mar 2012 13:14 #53833 by
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I am just looking for feed back on what I think I want to offer the local schools in my area for their proms. Any advise would be greatly recieved. Thanks

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19 Mar 2012 13:15 #53834 by Ben
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I wouldn't have used it personally, but it sounds like the sort of thing that people would use and it sounds like a good price :)
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19 Mar 2012 13:16 #53835 by
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Not a bad advert, Obviously I hope you have better layout and font and pictures on your final leaflet lol

But as I mentioned in chat, not sure if this breaks the advertising rules

FAQ #22 Stealth Advertising

But not bad wording, I'm even quite tempted ;)

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19 Mar 2012 13:26 #53838 by Jestor
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Nope, this is fine....

And now... I just gotta factor in airfare and I'm so there....

Never had a mani, I've had a pedi, and damn my feet looked good!!
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19 Mar 2012 14:57 #53844 by
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Thank you for your input,

I've just done a basic lay out coz I ain't good with computors, would have loved to put a few crowns and champan glasses in the pic too but don't know how too.

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19 Mar 2012 18:07 #53873 by ren
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There are some graphic designers here I believe. You could ask for help
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19 Mar 2012 19:23 #53884 by
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Ohhhh right PLEASE MAY I HAVE SOME HELP......

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19 Mar 2012 19:25 #53886 by
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Got my skype working now so I can talk with someone about the help I need too.

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20 Mar 2012 18:50 #53985 by
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Can anyone help me with my advert and make it look good

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