TotJO Artwork (Official Communications)

Really not sure, depends on how it looks on the T-shirt layout. Changing the font is easily doing though. I would need feedback from those who put together the final product before I can really say.

I'm curious why you shortened some of the sixteen point star's points. That would imply that some of the teachings are more important than the others.

I also agree about the font being difficult to read. Even as large as it is on this screen. It'd be even more so on moving fabric. Makes my eyes want to cross lol.

Kit wrote: I'm curious why you shortened some of the sixteen point star's points. That would imply that some of the teachings are more important than the others.

I hadn't noticed that... but now you say it, it does look strange.

*Shugs* looks like a normal twinkling star that flickers in and out. Nothing in life is in perfect unison. Including the doctrines. We learn each one at our own pace, some more than others, and even then they have the potential to fade and glow brightly within our lives at different points when we need them most. Just like a star twinkling in and out.

Just my thoughts.

I took some artistic license, and never intended to imply teachings were less or greater than each other.

This looks great. Might I copy the image to use on my PC as a background and on my Clerical Journal? If I were to use it publicly I would give credit to your User name here ( by public I mean something like in FB post)