Astrogator Story

I wrote a series of screenplays a number of years ago and was thinking of expanding them into novels. I was wondering what people here thought about the story idea. Here is the link to the outline:

https://docs.google.com/a/namisanfernandovalley.org/document/d/19Mjx_tNHiQTFbX4cgL1d7RPa3hl_Bl21y2hyiSJO4Fs/edit?usp=sharing

After the outline is a rough draft of the full novel. FYI.