TOTJO Certificate template test

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13 years 4 months ago #30465 by 666
This is a test, looks nice to me...
If Totjo like to use it as certificate, its ok, if not, its ok also
I'll do it, because I like to play with graphics.

this is an original template build from scratch (no one can have it), microlines, showing Temple logo in the middle, custom frame

http://i44.tinypic.com/200g09g.jpg


color can be changed easily its a big file... (is not the master)

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13 years 4 months ago #30469 by RyuJin
couldn't see it, for some reason it wouldn't load

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13 years 4 months ago #30474 by 666
is too big, try \"save as\" or \"save target as\"

http://i44.tinypic.com/200g09g.jpg

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13 years 4 months ago #30481 by RyuJin
not bad, i think it would look a bit better if the dark vertical lines matched the space between them and if the totjo logo was a little more pronounced(darker,to make it more visible but not to the point of making the text difficult to read)...

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13 years 4 months ago #30492 by Jestor
666, please take no offence, you ask, so I answer. I do not have the ability to create such a item (or any of the wonderful designs you had created, I use the gold insignia, you made, as a background on my phone).

I agree that the temple insignia should be a touch darker....

Is \"Grettings\" supposed to say \"Greetings\"?

And why the comparison to other religions at the bottom? We have no rabbis (or do we?). I think it should say, \"Minister of the Force, and entitiled to all the rights and privledges according to the customs and laws.\" Period.

One of the problems I see is the multicultural recognition in this religion. Is a catholic priest recognized in a country who's main deity is Allah? The line \"according to the customs and laws\" may need to have added \"recognized by the issuing country\".... Or some such wording...

Maybe this is already solved and I am talking about something of which is not a concern....

Anyway, I hope these were taken in the spirit in which they were intended...

Keep up the good work 666......

MTFBWY
Jestor

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13 years 4 months ago #30495 by RyuJin
i think (in regards to the mention of rabbi's etc) that he was simply using the original certificate as a template for the information to include on his design. counting the ordination from totjo i now have 3 and they all use similar wording. the trouble with legal documents is that they have to be worded very specifically or they become too open to interpretation.

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