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03 Sep 2015 11:36 #201790
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Interpretation is happily broad and loose in reality. Most contemporary haiku poets eschew all traditional rules, syllable counts etc.
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But we have our own thing going here, which is fun in its own way
Some examples...
spring runoff carrying a tune
swimming hole—
the first
dare
frograffitinsidecemberain
But we have our own thing going here, which is fun in its own way
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03 Sep 2015 13:56 #201801
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The Force is with you, always.
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@ Den-
They may be all that, and they may not. :woohoo:
A deep connection to the Way goes beyond form or idea, so I wouldn't worry too much about appearances or presentation- but instead, if it shakes me with a laugh from the Great Center
They may be all that, and they may not. :woohoo:
A deep connection to the Way goes beyond form or idea, so I wouldn't worry too much about appearances or presentation- but instead, if it shakes me with a laugh from the Great Center
The Force is with you, always.
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03 Sep 2015 19:06 #201829
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okay, i got it, it's cool
so, jedi haiku are not traditional haiku - I can live with that. )
in Japanese haiku got much closer to the Way because of the hieroglyphics. it was both visual and word poetry, in a way. sometimes, with beautiful illustrations.
I seek the modern way to do the thing, a form for concentrated strikes of the Force through art.
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okay, i got it, it's cool
so, jedi haiku are not traditional haiku - I can live with that. )
in Japanese haiku got much closer to the Way because of the hieroglyphics. it was both visual and word poetry, in a way. sometimes, with beautiful illustrations.
I seek the modern way to do the thing, a form for concentrated strikes of the Force through art.
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03 Jan 2016 20:22 - 03 Jan 2016 20:34 #218577
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Here are some more:
* * *
Just before my eyes
A new universe emerged –
A flower blossomed!
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Hurry, open up,
Painted ceiling up above!
Let me see the sky.
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Days and nights fly by
Circling in a wild dance,
Like a butterfly.
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Just before my eyes
A new universe emerged –
A flower blossomed!
* * *
Hurry, open up,
Painted ceiling up above!
Let me see the sky.
* * *
Days and nights fly by
Circling in a wild dance,
Like a butterfly.
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07 Jan 2016 22:55 - 07 Jan 2016 22:56 #219923
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* * *
The magical veil –
Dirt is hidden under snow.
Think of eternal!
winter in Ukraine
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So fragile you are,
Eternal truth inside me –
Snowflake in my palm.
The magical veil –
Dirt is hidden under snow.
Think of eternal!
winter in Ukraine
* * *
So fragile you are,
Eternal truth inside me –
Snowflake in my palm.
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Darkness on both sides.
Walking on a ray of light –
Balance of the Force.
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* * *
Darkness on both sides.
Walking on a ray of light –
Balance of the Force.
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