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07 Apr 2015 10:55 #187176 by Tarran
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Alexandre Orion wrote: Beau soleil d'avril :
Le vent du nord-est inspire
Nos prochains soupirs. :unsure:


c'était génial :D

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08 Apr 2015 11:16 #187245 by
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The howl from within
Which you believed was a hurt
Was really a wolf

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08 Apr 2015 20:21 - 08 Apr 2015 20:25 #187295 by OB1Shinobi
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a green living leaf
springs to life in a grey world
to grow a new hope

People are complicated.
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09 Apr 2015 17:21 #187387 by Nicole Judge
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A lonely person
living life among those who
can't be waken up.

~ may the Force guide us ~
the root source of suffering is an ignorance of ourselves

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09 Apr 2015 17:37 #187394 by Nicole Judge
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Neither light not dark,
I am the blurred line that sets
the two worlds apart.

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09 Apr 2015 18:48 #187404 by
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I can be happy.
Amidst the terrible storm,
I can be the sun

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09 Apr 2015 19:37 #187414 by Alexandre Orion
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Thé vert à minuit --
Deux questions - une seule réponse :
Oui, et moi aussi ...

;)

Be a philosopher ; but, amidst all your philosophy, be still a man.
~ David Hume

Chaque homme a des devoirs envers l'homme en tant qu'homme.
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23 Aug 2015 19:52 #200592 by TheDude
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The Force surrounds us;
It binds and permeates us.
Through it, we are one.

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25 Aug 2015 02:43 #200754 by
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The world that I see
Is not that world that you see
And yet both are real

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26 Aug 2015 00:55 #200883 by RyuJin
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Revitalizing
Through the power of the force
We can continue

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26 Aug 2015 02:34 #200897 by
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Sakura flower
pretty in the morning sun
slowly falling down

I'm not sure if I got the count right:)

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30 Aug 2015 20:46 - 30 Aug 2015 20:50 #201418 by
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An act may be black,
Or an act may be white, but
All actors are grey.
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30 Aug 2015 20:58 #201421 by Alexandre Orion
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Grey are all actors ;
Of many hues are the Acts ...
... And what of the Stage ?

;)

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31 Aug 2015 22:37 #201535 by void
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the stage has no hue;
light and dark together flow,
back and forth, always.
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01 Sep 2015 15:10 #201605 by J. K. Barger
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Supports of the Play,
Colors move between value.
How is your acting?

The Force is with you, always.
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01 Sep 2015 15:27 #201606 by RyuJin
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all the world's a stage
the people, merely actors
we all play our part

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01 Sep 2015 15:35 #201608 by Alexandre Orion
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Our parts, we all play -
- Grounds of consciousness, perhaps
A beastie or two ...

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02 Sep 2015 22:46 #201745 by J. K. Barger
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Shakti and Shiva-
The divine play of Lila;
Ebbing and Flowing..

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03 Sep 2015 01:40 #201761 by RyuJin
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the force flows strongly
reach out with open senses
peace will come to you

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03 Sep 2015 10:50 #201786 by
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Brothers, haiku's are more than count of syllables and a bit of significancy.

There should be a deep connection to nature, moment, deep zen state of concentration and most careful choice of words, including not only what they mean and count of syllables, but etymology, resonance, rhythm within rhythm and all this inexplainable things which constitute poetry.

Haiku is more a meditation than wordplay. One true haiku a day is a tremendous feat.

That being said, I wish you success :)

(My haikus are in Russian, translation of poetry is hard for me still.)

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