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13 Jan 2014 14:05 #133071
by Alexandre Orion
Be a philosopher ; but, amidst all your philosophy, be still a man.
~ David Hume
Chaque homme a des devoirs envers l'homme en tant qu'homme.
~ Henri Bergson
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Hamsters do it well ;
Not all can be ha-i-ku --
It has to have grace.
Not all can be ha-i-ku --
It has to have grace.
Be a philosopher ; but, amidst all your philosophy, be still a man.
~ David Hume
Chaque homme a des devoirs envers l'homme en tant qu'homme.
~ Henri Bergson
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28 Jan 2014 11:48 - 28 Jan 2014 11:52 #135252
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We tend to stick to a pretty general definition of haiku here, and I'm guilty of that as well here... you don't want to be the only guy writing 5-3-3 haiku for example 
but I thought this might be of interest to some of you. It gives you a more "contemporary" definition of haiku, including kigo, kireji etc.
I'm not posting this to say "You're all doing it wrong!" because there is no "wrong", I just thought it might be interesting
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but I thought this might be of interest to some of you. It gives you a more "contemporary" definition of haiku, including kigo, kireji etc.I'm not posting this to say "You're all doing it wrong!" because there is no "wrong", I just thought it might be interesting
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30 Jan 2014 05:18 - 30 Jan 2014 05:19 #135650
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Did I do that right
There were so many new rules
Something about fall :dry:
There were so many new rules
Something about fall :dry:
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30 Jan 2014 05:49 #135653
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It doesn't matter;
"Learn the rules, and then forget,"
Those were Basho's words.
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Reliah wrote: Did I do that right
There were so many new rules
Something about fall :dry:
It doesn't matter;
"Learn the rules, and then forget,"
Those were Basho's words.
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30 Jan 2014 12:03 #135668
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Reliah writes well
So really, let's not worry
About stupid "rules"
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Steamboat's was better
So I'm off to stick my head
Into the oven.
Wait... :huh:
So really, let's not worry
About stupid "rules"
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Steamboat's was better
So I'm off to stick my head
Into the oven.
Wait... :huh:
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30 Jan 2014 12:16 - 30 Jan 2014 12:36 #135669
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On the subject of change (v Jedi) and I'm having "ev-ry-thing" as 3 syllables, I'm British :
Change is everything
Leaves drift along the river
To meet with the falls
or maybe
Everything is change
Spring wind touches river ice
Unlocks autumn leaves
:Change is everything
Leaves drift along the river
To meet with the falls
or maybe
Everything is change
Spring wind touches river ice
Unlocks autumn leaves
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30 Jan 2014 14:53 - 30 Jan 2014 14:54 #135689
by void
...ohlord. now I want to try a haiku in my native dialect...
"Ev-er-ee-thang stinks
Y'all talk all 'em fancy words
book-larnin' ain't me."
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tzb wrote: On the subject of change (v Jedi) and I'm having "ev-ry-thing" as 3 syllables, I'm British
...ohlord. now I want to try a haiku in my native dialect...
"Ev-er-ee-thang stinks
Y'all talk all 'em fancy words
book-larnin' ain't me."
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Last edit: 30 Jan 2014 14:54 by void.
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