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8 years 7 months ago #200897 by
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Sakura flower
pretty in the morning sun
slowly falling down

I'm not sure if I got the count right:)

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8 years 6 months ago - 8 years 6 months ago #201418 by
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An act may be black,
Or an act may be white, but
All actors are grey.
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8 years 6 months ago #201421 by Alexandre Orion
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Grey are all actors ;
Of many hues are the Acts ...
... And what of the Stage ?

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8 years 6 months ago #201535 by steamboat28
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the stage has no hue;
light and dark together flow,
back and forth, always.
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8 years 6 months ago #201605 by J. K. Barger
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Supports of the Play,
Colors move between value.
How is your acting?

The Force is with you, always.
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8 years 6 months ago #201606 by RyuJin
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all the world's a stage
the people, merely actors
we all play our part

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8 years 6 months ago #201608 by Alexandre Orion
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Our parts, we all play -
- Grounds of consciousness, perhaps
A beastie or two ...

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8 years 6 months ago #201745 by J. K. Barger
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Shakti and Shiva-
The divine play of Lila;
Ebbing and Flowing..

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8 years 6 months ago #201761 by RyuJin
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the force flows strongly
reach out with open senses
peace will come to you

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8 years 6 months ago #201786 by
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Brothers, haiku's are more than count of syllables and a bit of significancy.

There should be a deep connection to nature, moment, deep zen state of concentration and most careful choice of words, including not only what they mean and count of syllables, but etymology, resonance, rhythm within rhythm and all this inexplainable things which constitute poetry.

Haiku is more a meditation than wordplay. One true haiku a day is a tremendous feat.

That being said, I wish you success :)

(My haikus are in Russian, translation of poetry is hard for me still.)

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